I've started a feud.
I've lit a fuse
and amused the women-
I choose the best
and retreat to my nest.
(I'm lying)
And crying. (Lie.)
Kind of high off
controversy and free verse.
Re-verse rethink repair
the spit-clogged kitchen-sink-
(I live clean) but
cleanliness is a curse-
a phantom nurse
irons my dirty shirts
while I fuck an empty sheet
in my naked bedroom.
I'm running out of head room.
And that's no lie.
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I wrote this on my arm in a bathroom stall at school today.
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love, GOD
I LOVE THIS TOPIC!!!
^me crazy, you ignore. yes.
Especially the bit with the fuse.
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You are now leaving Normal.
Please adjust your preconceptions.
And is just overall interesting to read...
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I'm feeling negative now, so don't take anything I say to heart. I love you all the same.
A jumble, a spill, it lacks control and ricochets erratically off the walls of any discernable point. The internal rhyme is sometimes good, and sometimes not. You decide which portions you like, it really doesn't matter what I think.
Clearly you had something in mind, I just don't know what it is/was/will be/or never ever will/was/were be.
Experimentation is good of course. Growth is necessary... back to drinking.
- Keegan
excellent use of experimental structure, and homophones. I particularly enjoyed the internal rhymes.
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